Ciao a tutti,
Come tutti sanno o si dice, l’attuale situazione economica è negativa e si riflette soprattutto nel settore del lavoro. Ma dobbiamo continuare ad impegnarci affinché un giorno la fortuna ci sia favorevole. Anche io mi trovo su un percorso simile in questo momento, quindi ho fornito il mio curriculum e il modello di lettera di presentazione che utilizzo di più, affinché voi ragazzi possiate guardarlo e suggerirmi le modifiche che possono essermi utili. Arrosto o come si vuole chiamarlo… La lingua è una cosa che conosco, sto cercando altre cose che possano influenzare negativamente la mia domanda, perché è molto…. Per favore chiedi se sono necessarie altre informazioni. Grazie🙏.
https://www.reddit.com/gallery/1fznswg
di BeautifulScar8505
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As long as you don’t have 10 year working experience, you should keep your CV to one page.
This post is better suited for r/arbeitsleben
However, a few points from my side:
– it’s not common to use a profile summary in Germany. So you don’t have to include it.
– your format is inconsistent, dates are missing and overall it looks very squeezed
– when english is C1 and german A1, what’s your native language?
– you should include your visa status
– imho overall it’s too much text just for internships, but other might see this differently
– correct me if I’m wrong but I assume you used GPT for the cover letter? At least this reads very familiar to me…
I have yet to see a summary section on a CV that did anything except extend an already too-long document with even more empty phrasing.
Those “soft skills” are painfully obvious, some overlap, others are totally vague (for instance “interpersonal skills”). Even the grammar isn’t good – some are nouns, some are verbs, no pattern. That section says nothing except that you went looking for some positive attributes.
PS: I am looking for an internship. And neglect the date on last experience i forgot to remove it after editing.
And I personally know a person who got hired for internship with the same format (both cv & cover letter) in a big company.
One leverage was a 2 month working experience.