Ciao a tutti,
Spero che stiate tutti bene! Apprezzerei molto il vostro feedback sul mio curriculum. Per darvi un po’ di contesto, sono uno studente magistrale in Germania (inizierò a ottobre) e al momento sto cercando un lavoro da studente correlato al mio campo.
Finora ho ottenuto solo un colloquio, ma ho ricevuto rifiuti da tutte le altre candidature. 😅
Se c’è qualcosa nel mio curriculum che merita di essere migliorato, o se hai suggerimenti su come migliorarlo, sono aperto a qualsiasi consiglio o critica costruttiva.
Grazie mille in anticipo!
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di Wonderful_Business42
3 Comments
You are not supposed to lie in your CV. Did you really do an Abitur in Morocco? You can’t do an Abitur in “Rechnungswesen”.
Yes you should add the local name of your qualification with a short explanation of what it represents as equivalent for example ( like XYZ ( Abitur equivalent in Marokko)
I am not sure about those first sentences. I have never seen german CVs that have it. Usually the first parts at least in my experience only list basic info: Full name, gender, birthday, nationality and I usually add that I am married with two kids, though this is just because of senior positions I apply to.
Your first sentences sound kinda cheesy. You described how you reach your goals but seriously what the business cares about is you helping them reach theirs.
I would just leave our these sentences and leave the free text for your cover letter that should describe how you are a good match for the particular job.